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Your writing needs to be edited.
Posted by: old_user on Oct-26-09 11:10 AM (EST)
After the first I just skimmed. The actual meanings of two of your "points" are unclear, and "then"
is different than "than"...and I'm no English teacher.
You really should employ a proof-reader if your going to present yourself as an expert on a reputable website.
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